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    Главная » 2016 » Март » 14 » Essays - Discipline and Talent
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    Essays - Discipline and Talent

    You have 40 minutes to do this task.

    Comment on the following statement.

     

    In any occupation discipline is more important than talent.

    What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?

     

    Write 200 – 250 words.

     

    Use the following plan:

    − make an introduction (state the problem)

    − express your personal opinion and give 2–3 reasons for your opinion

    − express an opposing opinion and give 1–2 reasons for this opposing opinion

    − explain why you don’t agree with the opposing opinion

    − make a conclusion restating your position

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    4 Vampir4362  
    I believe that talent is more important than discipline. However, discipline should not be excluded completely. After all, without discipline talent lost.
    In my opinion, talented people are investing in product per capita.
    Talented people are much easier given the creation of the work.
    And finally, how would people have not labored, talented man with a small amount of discipline can achieve very good results.
    However, some people think that discipline is more important than talent. Nevertheless, I cannot consider these arguements convincing.
    Firstly, the music can not be written because of the discipline of one. This requires talent and inspiration.
    Secondly, something that a talented person will take a bit of time, it may take weeks for the average person.
    To conclude, talent is more important than the discipline, but only when poured two of these components, you can succeed

    3 leraapril99  
    Some people argue that discipline helps the musicians to create wonderful compositions. But in any case can not forget about the talent. 
        In my opinion, talented musicians much more. Firstly, musicians with the talent to easily and quickly compose new songs. Secondly, musicians with talent feel a spiritual need. Therefore, many of them are resting, creating a new composition. Finally, never leaves the inspiration to create. 
       However, for many, discipline is more important than talent. Since the discipline builds character. Thanks to the discipline of composition and the works are always the ending.
       Nevertheless, I cannot consider these arguments convincing. Firstly, talented people need much less time for writing songs. Secondly, the composition may be popular, if it is written with soul. And without inspiration and talent, this will not work. 
       To conclude, I can say that the talented musicians are the most interesting. After all, their songs in the first place, they put their soul, and only then work. This talent is the most important basis for a musician.

    2 soffiamsr4  
    It goes without saying that talented musicians more productive and innovative. But we cannot forget about discipline.
    In my opinion, talented musicians creat legendary music. To begin with, if you have talent hence you love it. So, you will do it great. Moreover, music creation needs inspiration. This is the most important condition. Talent and inspiration are always linked. Besides, writing songs is much easier for talented musicians. So, they achieve more.
    However, some people think that discipline is more important than talent. Firstly, music needs systematic trainings. So, you have to be disciplined in your practice. Secondly, discipline will motivate to creat more.
    Nevertheless, I cannot consider these arguements convincing. Firstly, talented people have capacity to some musical instruments. That is why they learn fast. And sometimes can miss their trainings. Secondly, musician cannot write songs because he must. It depends only on his talent and inspiration. 
    To conclude, I can say that talent is the most important in art, especially in music. Talented musicians are always much more popular than those who write on request. Anyway, we must take the best use of talent and discipline.

    1 defestel  
    People have always argued what is necessary for better performance at work, talent or discipline. Both opinions seem to have their reasons for existance.
       To my mind, the talented people can achieve better results at work. First of all, it is easier for them to learn and adapt. Moreover, they are quicker at making decisions and producing ideas which is necessary for business. Besides, talented people are more creative which is important for development of new products and services, new methods and new solutions.
       However, some people will definitely say that discipline is needed more than talent. Firstly, hard-working people make fewer mistakes than workes who rely only on their gifted abilities. Secondly, they think there are such professions that do not require creativity.
       Nevertheless, I cannot possibly agree with these statements. Mistakes are part and parcel of any work and experimentation. If we are afraid of mistakes and deny experiments, we will never develop. More than that, you need to show skills and abilities at any work to be promoted.
       To conclude, I can say that to become a real professional you need to demonstrate real talent, but this does not mean that you can forget about discipline. We just need to make the best use of our potentional.

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